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ClubCJ Flyers

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:14 am
by Ozie
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thanks to Nick.

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:21 am
by Josh_Emerton
Just couple of points.

In the text under the picture

From 'Share' replace with 'share with other owners of the superb CJ Lancer'?

Decapitalise 'Join'?

Decapitalise 'Amazing Car Club Dedicated' and 'The' in the same line?

Can anyone think of a better word for 'amazing'?

Just my opinion, don't need to heed it if ya dont want to.

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:21 am
by Ozie
Ar'well
it was just an idea anyway!!!

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:25 am
by Ozie
Josh_Emerton wrote:Just couple of points.

In the text under the picture

From 'Share' replace with 'share with other owners of the superb CJ Lancer'?

Decapitalise 'Join'?

Decapitalise 'Amazing Car Club Dedicated' and 'The' in the same line?

Can anyone think of a better word for 'amazing'?

Just my opinion, don't need to heed it if ya dont want to.

OK Josh,
we can change it!!!!
i'll de-capitilse you in a minute lol.

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:26 am
by Josh_Emerton
I think you mean decapitate. Oh. Bugger.

I was just suggesting its up 2 u lol

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:33 am
by Ozie
Mattigins wrote:maybe put "your car is wanted"

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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:34 am
by Josh_Emerton
^^ +1

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:56 am
by Vaelehn
How come some of the "The" is capitalized and some aren't? Maybe "ClubCJ is a Dedicated Car Club for the CJ Lancer. We are Here to Help & Share Knowledge Throughout the CJ Community. Come Join us at www.ClubCJ.net The Best CJ Lancer Club Around." I know I changed it a little but I think it sounds a little better this way. Just my opinion. However even if you don't change it you need to keep the grammar / capitalization the same way throughout the entire banner. Capitalization is fine but THE AND AN OR BUT IS TO ARE A (with is iffy it can go either way depending on who you talk to... thats why I left it out (all connector words)) should never be capitalized unless they all are. Grammatically speaking. :) Just my 2 cents.

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:01 am
by Ozie
ok sweet i will change it!!
any more ideas????? Anyone!!!!

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:10 am
by Josh_Emerton
Get rid of CJ Community?
And maybe..just maybe, an explanation of CJ for those who dont know it? Old fogies basically.

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:13 am
by Ozie
give me the wording josh!! or someone!
cmon this is a group effort!

Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:15 am
by Josh_Emerton
I mean like, replace with 'other CJ Lancer owners'